Don't know if I said this in the last one. But I've been hurt like you couldn't believe the past few days. By two of my favorite people in the world. So yeah.
This one there is 2 versions posting both, someone tell me which you like better.
Forgive me from asking,
But I need to know
Have you seen this girl?
She's been messed up before.
Fallen down on the path a few time before
I don't know who she is anymore
But I hope she knows that I used to love her
I used to pray for her
Every sunday, everyday that I knew her
I used to love her
Who knows maybe I still do?
All I know now is that's not who I knew
I don't know whats wearing her skin
I don't know what's behind those eyes
I don't know that heart
I don't know that hand that she held, I don't know those daggers
That fell out of her mouth
and came down to slit my throat
Please I don't mean to be a bother
But i need to find her
I need to know she's ok
She won't say any words to me anymore
For the fact I'm always worried about her
I need to find her, I need to tell her
How I feel about her.
I'm scared for her, I need to find her, I need to tell her, need to let her know
That I still love her, still care about her, I still need her
After nine years of knowing that face
She changed somehow, when I wasn't looking, she ran away
I don't know what to do anymore
I don't know If I should still run for her, or let her rest?
This one there is 2 versions posting both, someone tell me which you like better.
Forgive me from asking,
But I need to know
Have you seen this girl?
She's been messed up before.
Fallen down on the path a few time before
I don't know who she is anymore
But I hope she knows that I used to love her
I used to pray for her
Every sunday, everyday that I knew her
I used to love her
Who knows maybe I still do?
All I know now is that's not who I knew
I don't know whats wearing her skin
I don't know what's behind those eyes
I don't know that heart
I don't know that hand that she held, I don't know those daggers
That fell out of her mouth
and came down to slit my throat
Please I don't mean to be a bother
But i need to find her
I need to know she's ok
She won't say any words to me anymore
For the fact I'm always worried about her
I need to find her, I need to tell her
How I feel about her.
I'm scared for her, I need to find her, I need to tell her, need to let her know
That I still love her, still care about her, I still need her
After nine years of knowing that face
She changed somehow, when I wasn't looking, she ran away
I don't know what to do anymore
I don't know If I should still run for her, or let her rest?
i would love this one if i hadn't read the other one. This one is good, the other one takes me much deeper
ReplyDeleteI agree, the other one I quit half way threw but I liked the opening and kept it to make this one. Than I didn't like it as much and finished the last few lines of the other one.
ReplyDeleteI feel this one is too....messy? I suppose is the word. I was conflicted about emotions writing this, and I think it shows with how sloppy this one is. Compared to the other.